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Bending over left and right
Ive been playing with it all night
No sleep for me
I sip my bubble tea
Slinky, slinky, slinky
So shiny and silver
When it cuts me i quiver
Playing with it on the stairs
Completely unaware
Slinky, slinky, slinky
I feel a sudden pain
A shiver goes through my veins
"Owie" I say
But i dare not look away
My slinky killing me?
Thats something I cant believe
Slinky, slinky, slinky
Bending over left and right
Ive been playing with it all night

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wanted to try a new style......only on a few poems though

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!Sahmeh Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is super cute!!
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~Cronacantdealwithit Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
really? thanks!
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!Sahmeh Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah it is.
Thanks for telling me about this piece... I love stuff like this c:
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~Cronacantdealwithit Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
i wanted to try a new style, plus i read your page and you said you liked this stuff
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!Sahmeh Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't write anything unless it rhymes..
It never seems the same with out rhyming haha.
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~Cronacantdealwithit Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
well ill try writting more like this ^-^
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!Sahmeh Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You don't have to if it's not your style. It just happens to be mine :P
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~Cronacantdealwithit Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
oh well alright then ^_^ say do you like any anime?
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